How to Choose Friends(老师修改后)

#英文写作

Fellow students, parents, how are you today? (Answer) I hope the weather is well good for travelling. (Yes. / No.) Today I want to talk about how to choose friends. (Oh. /Wow. /Uh? )

It is very hard to find a true friend. I, myself, had some difficulty finding my real friend. You must not be blinded by some of offers, and you must think about the advantages and disadvantages. I had once chosen the wrong friend, which caused me pain in my life, and even now I haven’t walked out of the shadows. ( Oh … )

But I’m not saying you can’t trust or make any friends. I’m just saying you must be careful choosing them. Is everything clear? (Answer.)

So , how can you choose? Here are some tips from me which you could use:

  1. Observe the behavior of them.

  2. Observe them for a long time to see if his/her attitude towards you.

  3. Consider his/her place behaviour of in sociality social situations.

I hope you are having a good day. Best wishes to you all. Thank you for listening! (Applaud)

Teacher’s comments:

  • Wow, great job, Pluvia. This is a really good speech. The organisation is great, and I really like the sentence, “even now I haven’t walked out of the shadows”. That is a fantastic description of your difficult situation.

  • The difference between ‘well’ and ‘good’.

    • ‘Well’ describes a verb;

      “She sings very well.”

    • ‘Good’ describes a noun;

      “The weather was very good today.”